Please assist with ensuring writing is clear and concise following APA guidelines and that rubric is clearly followed. Highlight any changes that are made. Some of the feedback is provided below:
You stated legal and ethical risks are: security, privacy, productivity, and objectivity but these are not defined at all. I have no idea what you mean. Writing is unreadable.
In revisions, you tried to fix some of the troublesome writing, but most of the errors are still there. It’s so confusing to read!
Score is from previous attempt. No substantive changes were made. You still do not discuss social media, only a company “platform.”
Writing is troublesome to read and lacks clear meaning. You attempted to identify one legal risk stating that it could be a “federal offense” (not really, this isn’t criminal law) to impact employees’ protected concerted activity, but you did not define what that is. It’s not clear that you understand what protected concerted activity is. You did not make any distinction between private and governmental organizations. They have different liabilities, depending on whether the employer is public or private, with regard to the Constitution.
You added information about a case, but still did not explain what protected concerted activity is. You stated employees’ rights were violated with respect to this right, but you did not explain the right itself. What is protected concerted activity? Why is it protected?
APA style is partly used in References. Journal titles are in italics, but references are not arranged in alphabetical order. Instead of “national government,” use federal government and refer to specific laws, not just the “laws of the national government.”
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